After last time’s poor effort, I decided to “play small” and attempt some detail on the figures. I rather like them the way they are but they do need to be more detailed as they are the focus. Maybe confining myself to a small area will increase my confidence again. So faces and feet are my tasks for this session.
I don’t want to put her feet in till I have his leg right. His left leg is too long (or his right leg is too short!) so I tackled that first. I re-drew the leg, straightening it and shortening it, making more of the fall of the trousers. It looked better so I ventured in with paint. The foot is rather balletic. However, attempting to insert the other foot showed up my erratic drawing skills. This foot is on the load-bearing leg but putting it centrally, in line with his chin so to speak, left the other foot floating.
Frustrated, I turned to her face and am reasonably content with the result so far. Tiny dabs of paint inch the face towards likeness – not there yet, but enough done to enable me to work on the dress next time, then over to him again. Could do with some serendipity but hard graft may bring it on!
This is a pretty torrid time for me – everything I try to paint turns out badly. Watercolour, pastel, even my faithful oils, troup past me, one failure after another. On the bright side – this has happened before. I reach the stage when I almost decide to give up painting altogether. But I have the memory of other times when everything goes brilliantly, when everything I touch is painting magic. So I don’t give up….. yet.
I have just spent and hour and a half on “in the sunshine” and have washed out (with turps) most of what I have done. It seemed to consist of wrong tones in the wrong place, poorly applied paint, light source undetermined, etc., etc.. Ugh! About all I have achieved is the correction of the original drawing. Still that’s better than no progress at all.
They do look more comfortable now that the posts have something substantial to rest on. The bottom bar of the railings now shows up against the extended floor that has also provided that solidarity for the pillars. Not a lot to show for an hour and a half ……
One of the paintings in my recent Exhibition in Llangollen Museum that I could have sold many times over was this little watercolour of rainy Llangollen. It didn’t seem to matter which part of the United Kingdom you lived in, this was the one you wanted. This was unexpected, to say the least, so no prints and no cards, and I don’t do repeat paintings. I don’t greatly care for commissions either as I find it difficult to create a painting when other people’s expectations are riding on it.
However, I did agree to attempt my local bridge “in the same style”. I thought “nice little watercolour – I know the bridge very well – I only have to paint it in blue – shouldn’t take long!” Wrong, wrong, wrong! After six attempts I was desperate. Nothing worked. Painting the bridge in blue wasn’t difficult. The problem was that each effort lay on the page – dead; lifeless and without vitality; nothing I would put my name to. Goodness knows I’ve seem the bridge in the rain countless times – I’ve even seen it in the dark!
Inspiration! Moonshine on the water! What do you think? I love it.
Isn’t it wonderful how a few squiggles of pastel can say so much! I have been working on this picture as a demonstration for my class, so the whole thing has taken, in total, about an hour and half to paint.
Most of the trees have been indicated by sideways strokes of the pastel with pinks and yellows varying the summery greens. Scribbled dark green, blues, purples and maroons form the right-hand trees with open fencing allowing light to dapple the path.
The slowly moving, muddy water of the canal reflects the trees darkly, depicted by vertical strokes of the sides of the pastels. Late evening sun casts long shadows, warming the trees and unusually, catching the inside of the arch, a natural focus of the scene. Two little boats snuggle into the bank, but even the brightly coloured one cannot take precedence of that arch.
Now I’m working on the figures. The light is coming from the left and slightly behind the figures. His shirt is a little tidier and his right shoulder more visible. She now has two legs to stand on ( but no feet) and her cardigan somewhat reduced near his right shoulder. A suggestion of modelling on the dress is an improvement, and her hair is more like that of the girl I know. I have made a start on the faces, still very much at the early stage, his face now turned to look at the viewer.
There is still much to do here before I start to attend to details – his legs are wrong, she needs feet, the pillar should be longer and the edge of the terrace sticks out further behind the pillar. All these things will be sorted.
I’ve also been working on the big vase in the foreground and am very pleased with progress! It such a wonderful colour (it’s more turquoise in the painting), I’ve been aching to paint it. The shape is intricate so this is only the beginning but the colours, tones and textures around it make a perfect setting, contrasting rough stonework with smooth ceramic, dark blues and greens and lighter creamy browns.
The reflections of the three central boats made for an interesting hour or two. The colours and tones are muted but the water is so still that it is almost a mirror reflection. In fact, if I turn it upside down …
… they look very much the same as the real boats!
I have worked at the hulls of each one. They may be painted black but age, reflected and natural light, introduce a variety of grey tones which create the shape of all those curves and angles. Darkening the background behind the first boat has allowed me to bring out the shiny surface of the long cabin.
The long thin format of the painting is playing games with my usual plan of attack. Uncertainty is uncomfortable and I haven’t worked out what is so strange about the “letterbox”. I trust that I will come up with a riposte soon.
I’m working on the distant and middle ground. The distant hills are not, in fact, that distant! The very pale lilac I have used so far gives the impression the the hills are miles away, but they are barely one mile distant. I’ve deepened the tone of the hills, given them more shape and introduced colour into the hillside. Those brighter colours are working well with the turquoise vase, and the darker tones bring the hillside a little nearer.
I’ve indicated the top of the railings more as a line in the wet paint than as a separate painted element, so it’s green rather than black. That’s fine as it is present but not strident, and I am delighted that some of the random brush strokes look like leaves – serendipity again!
This is such fun. I’m enjoying this happy picture. I’ve started to give more energy and colour to the sky. Originally, I had intended only a thin wash of pale blue without any texture as there seemed to be so much else going on, but correcting the size of the heads had introduced thicker paint there, so I decided to repaint the whole sky, largely blue I agree but showing the occasional fluffy cloud perhaps. I think this makes a better balance.
I think the tree must be a member of the larch family. Its needle-like leaves fall from the branches like lazy hands trailing in the water. I have built up the perspective there by using different colours and tones as I passed over the area, first Ultramarine Blue, then Ultramarine Violet, then Viridian with the addition of Burnt Sienna.
I strengthened the painting without altering the tone of the distant hills, then turned my attention the the garden. Since we are raised above it, only the tops of the trees and bushes show, so a mixture of dark and light green suffice. I’ve gone in with strong darks behind his shoulder and legs, enjoying the contrast with his white shirt. These darks will hide some of the metalwork he is resting against beautifully.
So the canvas is largely covered. I have extended the blue area behind the boats. I may have overdone it. In fact I’m sure I have. The light reflecting off the side of the cabin of the middle boat loses impact against the light background. However, there is just some of the water on the right hand side to rough in now, so I can see how the painting will turn out. I’m very pleased with the composition. With a bit of work, this is going to turn into a good painting. Boats are fascinating. There are so many lines and angles. They catch the light in so many unexpected places.
I have started to clarify the painting of the middle boat, and for some reason the reflection looks wonky! I didn’t notice this when I was painting, so the photo has done me a service. For a start, the reflection of the prow is at the wrong angle, and where the prow becomes the side (a nebulous place!) also needs a little more definition. Although the red of the cabin wall has been calmed down with the addition of a little Burnt Sienna, it seems to glow even more.
I roughed in the background to help the define the upper edge of the boats and to set the atmosphere. It’s a bit dark, though the blue positively glows in contrast. I’ll think about that while I cover the canvas.
The boats themselves are also roughly painted. I do like to cover the whole canvas as quickly as possible especially when I haven’t toned down the white prior to drawing the image. Toning down is not quite what I do, for I frequently paint the whole canvas bright orange, such a cheerful colour! Well, I didn’t do it this time so need to accommodate the dominating white as I chose my tones.
This photo show you how very sketchy the painting is at this stage. Part of this is the need to cover the canvas, but it also allows me to choose how much detail I want to add later, besides giving me confidence that the drawing is largely correct. Sometimes I catch just the right brush stroke at this early stage, like the reflection of the side of the green boat, and can let it be part of the final painting – one of those pieces of serendipity I mentioned when I started writing a blog.